here's the address
http://ichigo100.forumotion.net/index.htm
Tuesday, March 24, 2009
Hehe
Saturday, February 28, 2009
hmm i guess all have to wait
Monday, January 26, 2009
Sunday, November 23, 2008
Away
so I'm probably away till the end of march 2009~
sorry but I can't give you more chapters until then but there is a ray of hope and maybe i will comeback earlier if my mom allow me after i perform well in upcoming exams and also it will be double treat on christmas this year as i will try to give the three chapters including a lengthy christmas-new year special
at the moment i am at a cyber cafe , hope that you can wait ~
bye
sorry for the trouble
and about the typing mistakes i made .. well those were cause my spacebar wasn't working.~
Sunday, October 12, 2008
Chapter 8 -- Mission Love Nest
Amachi: This is your General speaking (via walkie talkie), Everyone report your postions!
Sotomura: This is Topcat reporting, set!
Manaka: This is Lovebird speaking, set!
Satsuki & Yuri : This is Honeybee and Crystallight speaking, we are ready!
Komiyama : This is Octolight Speaking, ready!
Amachi: Ok lets commence Stage 1 ,... Honeybee and Crystallight make your move...
Satsuki and Yuri come out in front of the two guards at the back gate dressed in provocative dresses
Guard 1: hey dude, hit me ..cause I'm seeing two angels in front of me!
Guard 2: No its true ican see them too,.. but i will hit you anyway!
Satsuki : Come koochi koo, lets have fun with us!
Guards: WHY NOT !!?? LETS GO!!!!!!!!!
Yuri: Wait wait ... not here lets go there behind the bushes so noone sees us moarn...
Guards: Uddmm... OK!
Satsuki and Yuri lure them behind the bushes.....
As soon as the guards follow them inside the bush, Sotomura and Komiyama ....
Hit them with bats knocking them out
Then they take there clothes...
Manaka: You did a great job you two!
Satsuki: No surprise , we already know that we are beautifull and genius at that...right Yuri
Yuri: Right!
Manaka(thinking) : Man why did I asked...??
Sotomura and Komiyama now dressed as guards enter the mansion with Manaka acting as knocked out intruder...
Guard 3 : Who is this person??
Sotomura: Ahh... this is, we found him intruding.. when we caught him he said his a delivery boy so we are taking him to the boss to check whether he is lying or not
Guard3 : I'm not sure if i should let you..the orders were to let no one go beyond this point but..err
ok go but don't tell on me
Komiyama: Thanks ! we won't tell on you bro, see ya!
But as soon as there blunder was to become successfull , Tachibana notices them....
Tachibana: What the... guards they are intruder intruders catch them they are disguissed as guards!
manaka, sotomura, Komiyama: Acting time is up lets run for it
Na...na...na.....n....na(sfx)
manaka, sotomura, Komiyama are running and Tachibana and the guards are after them
Somehow they reach the part of the mansion where Toujo is ...
Komiyama and Sotomura: Manaka! You Go we will hold them....
Manaka: No... what are you saying ..i can't leave you behind
Sotomura, Komiyama : Just go .. you have a better chance of finding her like this
Manaka : Ok take care you two!
running from here and there ,..checking everyroom... Manaka reaches the large Dining hall where
Toujo & her parents are having dinner....
Manaka is immediately Noticed
Toujo : Manaka-kun ??....
Toujo's Father : What are you doing here?.. you bastard...guards guards!
Manaka(In loudVoice) : Toujo just listen to me for a sec,... old man i have no wrong intentions
and I'm very sorry to you and Toujo for breaking her heart,... But this I realized Today and No man in this world can stop me from saying this that the truth is " I ALWAYS LOVED YOU TOUJO " ,... " I HAVE COME TODAY TO TAKE YOU WITH MEAND I WON"T GO HOME WITHOUT YOU AND THATS THAT"
Toujo (red faced) : Manaka-kun...
Toujo's Father: What do you think of yourself... that you will come and say sorry and you would be forgiven??...
Manaka: I...I don't think i will be forgiven ever...but i know this that i ca't deny my feelings for her anymore..she is my life now and i can't let anyone take my life away
Tachibana and his guards have captured the rest of the gang and now reaches the hall
Toujo's Father: Tachi! Capture this guy too and take them to the police ...
Tachibana: Yes Father...
Tachibana punches manaka-kun and starts to take him away
but suddenly Toujo leaves her seat and stands up...
Toujo : FATHER! ... BRO! Stop it this Instance.....
What is the meaning of this the soft and gentle Toujo who never raised her voice against anyone
has broken the barriers of her voice... what will happen now
Stay tuned to the next exciting chapter of Ichigo 100% 2 (Fanfiction)
Name of next chapter: THE PROOF OF LOVE
Thursday, October 2, 2008
Never Seen Before Pictures!
I have decided to discuss Ichigo 100% more freely that why don't we have a forum ??
you can all visit it and discuss about the series there and also my fanfiction!
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Please do visit it, and instead of emailing me please request new chapters there!
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Saturday, September 27, 2008
Chapter7
Manaka (thinking): why..why.. first Noshino than this..Oh God which types of games are you playing with me??...
Satsuki walks upto Manaka
Satsuki(angryly) : Are you going to Cry Junpei-kun?? Are you !! well I won't let you to cry it of that easily!
Manaka : What do you mean??
Satsuki: First Tell Me why are you crying.. who gave you the right to cry when a JUST A FRIEND of yours is getting married.. you should be happy?
Manaka ( hesitates) : I...I don't..Don't know...I don't know it ! Maybe its just tears of happiness.
Satsuki: No..No! Thats where your wrong! Wanna me to tell you the reason! Cause your a coward! Your Running away from it! Deep inside... you know this that in actual you never loved anyone else except for Toujo... and when you picked Noshino over her you did a sacrifice of your love... you knew that Toujo could handle herself but Noshino wouldn't be able to forget you! But you know what ? I hate cowards!
Satsuki walks off in anger , but listening to her , Manaka sunks into a deeper slumber
Manaka (thinking) : Is she right..am I running away am I a coward but..but.. I just wanna ..I just wanna FIX all of it!! I don't want anybody to leave me ... oh god what should I do what should I do... ??
Amachi who have been observing all this from away walks up to Manaka ..
Amachi: Hey you stand up .. I don't know a Manaka like this!
Manaka: Amachi?
Amachi: Lets go over there to the bench ad talk about it then..
Manaka and Amachi walk over to the bench, while Manaka is sitting on the bench ..Amachi brings himself and him some juice...
Amachi : here!
Manaka :Thanks , but i don't feel like it..
Amachi:Stop being a kid! and drink it up, you haven't had anything except for tea since you arrived...
Manaka: Thanks !
Amachi (red faced): poof..yeah yeah!
Few Minutes later ....
Amachi: Well i don't know who am I say this or why am I saying this.. but I think Satsuki was right.. No matter what happened .. whether its a game of life played by God or fate ... the fact is
Noshino is No More.. sorry if that hurts but at the end of the day you it is true and its a another fact that your single and Sakura needs the love of a mother.. a kind and gentle one similar to Noshino, and except for Toujo there is no better candidate...
But unfortunately..her family doesn't like youand there forcefully marrying her to a rich relative of his dad... according to my sources even though he is very handsome Toujo doesn't like him ,
and to worsen the matter the marriage is next week so you have little time too.
Manaka : Uh..I ..I,, maybe ...maybe ur right .. but what should i do now??
Amachi : You will run away with her secretly!
Manaka( surprised) : Are you kiding me .. this is real life those things only happens in movies and stories and beside its too amatuer
Amachi: SO what you suggest that you go straight into their house and say "I love you Toujo" and she would say "oh i loved you too" and their family would say "oh they look so cute with each other " and you happily live ever after ...thats even more amateur!
Manaka: But ..But I could atleast try to talk to her!
Amachi: You still don't get it , her family is considering you a enemy.. her place is guarded round the clock, she is accompanied by bodyguards everywhere and much more!
Manaka: Ok..ok i got it... but you really think it would work??
Amachi: You leave that to me.. I will help you..!
Suddenly some thing comes from behind..its Satsuki ,Komiyama, Sotomura and Yuri
Satsuki, ,Komiyama, Sotomura and Yuri : We will help too!
So they all get ready to infilterate Toujo's Mansion,
Amachi (in a generals suit) : Are you ready soldiers !!?
Satsuki, Komiyama, Sotomura and Yuri : yes sir, definately sir!
Manaka (hesitatingly) : I gues I'm ready too!
Amachi: So here's the plan.. the mansion is surrounded by walls on all side ..guards do patrols everywhere.. everything is strict so we have no chance of mistake!
Satsuki, Komiyama, Sotomura and Yuri : Yes sir ..ai ai sir!
Amachi: SO here's the plan, we will ....XXXXX!
Amachi : since everyone know his part, take a transmitter from behind , and here's your codenames .... Satsuki - HoneyBee , Sotomura - TopCat , Yuri - CrystelLight, Komiyama - Octolight , Me- General and last but not the least Manaka - Lovebird and Toujo -Nest
Amachi: Since everyones ready .. any questions??
Satsuki, Komiyama, Manaka , Sotomura and Yuri :No sir
Satsuki, Komiyama, Manaka , Sotomura and Yuri : ok so lets do this thing!!!!
What will happen will there mission be a sucess or will they get caught??
Sorry guys thats it for this time , I am thankfull of all of yours comment and will try to post the next chapter earlier within a week ! I 'm also thankfull that you all waited for new chapters heartedly
So don't miss the next exciting chapter of Ichigo 100% 2 (Fanfiction)
By the way the next chapter is called - Mission Love Nest
I hope you like the twist in my style!
Wednesday, September 17, 2008
Those
waiting for
more chapters
Sorry My Exams
are going on
till 24th sept
I will post the new
chapters after
that surely!!
>.< sorry again
Also thanks everyone for your support!
I m also thinking of becoming a writer one day , I hope you will read other stories of mine also!!
Saturday, August 2, 2008
Chapter 6 "Don't Go"
Mrs Junpei : "Did you kept your nightsuite Manaka!?? "
Manaka : " Yes Mom "
Mrs Junpei : " Did you put some water bottles for the trip !?? "
Manaka : " Yeah Mom already! "
Mrs Junpei : " Did you take your wallet !?? "
Manaka : " Yeah Mom, cut it out already ,.. i'm not a kid anymore "
Mrs Junpei : " Ok.. ok ... well did you put your spare underwear "
Manaka : " Mom !! "
Mrs Junpei : " Well if everything settled ,..lets go ! "
Manaka & others : " Yeah "
Manaka : " Mom isn't Dad going ? "
Manaka : " Ok,... well it seems we can't do a thing about it... sorry Dad, I will bring some soveneirs.. do you want something specific ?? "
Mr Junpei (perverted look ) : " well you can bring me some Geisha photo's "
Mrs Junpei ( Holding his ear ) : " well be happy you have me.. cut it out already would ya "
Manaka & others : " Bye "
Mr Junpei : " Bye .... take care! "
Mrs Junpei : " Manaka dear, hurry and buy the tickets "
Yuri : " Its your fault , we are late , if you had booked the tickets before,.. this wouldn't have happened "
Manaka : " Well ..ok...ok I will just get them now ! "
Stranger 1 : " Hey you wai ! "
Stranger 2 : " We knew you would do tha .. "
Manaka : " Sotomura... and... and Komitama "
Komiyama : " its not Komitama ! Its Komiyama ! "
Manaka : " What are you guys doing here... How have you been "
Sotomura : " Well we thought as always you will be reckless , so we bought tickets for ya all "
Komiyama : " You should also thanks Satsuki also,.. it was she who told us that your coming today "
Manaka : " Well thanks guys, th for backing me up "
Yuri : " If everything settled lets get going "
Announcement : " The Kyoto Express will now leave platform no.4 on scheduled time "
Manaka : " Whew ! we made it in time ... "
Yuri : " Look whose talking ,.. the ' Mr Late ' "
Manaka : " I'm not Mr Late "
Mrs Junpei : " Behave you two,... we are not alone "
Mrs Junpei : " Well Sotomura-kun and Komiyama-kun sorry for their childish behaviour.. "
Sotomura : " No..no.. its Ok we are used to it ... besides I'm Glad that our group is joining up again "
Manaka : " Yeah i think so too ,.. well how have you two been doing lately ? "
Komiyama : Well we as you know have our Entertainment Company.. we currently signed up our 100,000 user ! "
Manaka : " Oh! congrats for that you two "
Komiyama : " Well congrats to you too , we heard that you signed a big contract yourself "
Yuri : " Well atleast he is somewhat usefull "
Sotomura ( with a cat eye ) : " Well Yuri-san, would you like to work for our company ?? "
Yuri : " Well ok but what does your company do ? "
Manaka : " Well its better you don't hear it,... I think you should skip "
Yuri : " Whoa... its Huge.. Even bigger than Amachi-kun's other mansions "
Manaka : " Well we are at his place alright! "
Sotomura : " Well I think its just that his family doesn't wan't a stone unturned for this wedding "
Satsuki : " Welcome Everyone!! "
Manaka : " Hi there Satsuki & Amachi..congrats "
Amachi : " Well thanks .. we are not yet couples though.. the wedding cermony is the day after tomorrow until then you can all rest here in your personnel rooms "
Satsuki (claps to draw attention ) : " Well everyone..please come this way the welcome tea is ready we shall talk in the dining room "
Manaka : " Well its a good Idea , lets go everyone "
Mrs Junpei : " well sorry manaka-kun.. i would skip it .... I'm feeling sleepy and I will take Sakura -chan with me ..... she's already aslept "
Manaka : " Well ok .. see ya tommorrow "
Satsuki : " For a while i have been wondering where's Noshino-chan.. isn't she with you ?? "
Amachi : " Yeah, last time I was in a bit of hurry so i didn't ask as well.. how is she "
Komiyama and Sotomura : " Yeah,.. where is she ? "
Yuri : " Stop it ya all ,.. Noshino-kun is no more ok ! And Manaka-kun is still recuperating from the loss "
Satsuki and others : "what ?? "
Satsuki : " Its very sad to hear, I shouldn't have taken up the subject "
Others : " we are sorry too, we shouldn't have asked "
Manaka : " No..no ..its ok, besides i think she will continue to live inside my heart "
Toujo : " Excuse me everyone, sorry I'm late "
Toujo : " Sorry everyone.. I would be outside in the lawn for a while"
Manaka : " No wait Toujo... ! ! "
Satsuki : " Stop it Manaka-kun !! "
Manaka : " But.. but why woldn't she talk to me, .. why does she keep's avoiding me ?? Why ? "
Satsuki : " Well its not your fault or anything,.. I just heard that sheis being forcibly married .. last week her family arranged her marriage to the son of of a family friend "
Manaka (shocked ) : " What ?? "
Manaka thinking : "Why am I feeling sad , i should be happy that she's being married.. why are tears coming out ?? "
Will Aya Toujo be married off ?? What are these feelings of unrest in Manaka's mind ? What will happen next ? Does Satsuki still has some feelings for Manaka ?
ABOUT NEXT Chapter: well it would be posted in a week check back regularly or just use the subscribe button on the left.. sorry for being late you all .. Its kinda that my maternal Grandpa just died so I'm still sad of it .
Tuesday, July 15, 2008




See the above sample.. a chinese guy made this ,his also a fan of ichigo 100% and Aya so if you like this quality ... tell me i will pursue him to make this script and if your a drawer please do help!! Or if you know someone than thats also acceptable
This my thx to everyone reading my blog... I am sorry to Sasuki fans who wanted her to be with Manaka and even I once thought of it but in the end the slow decent character of Manaka didn't fit with the dominating character of Satsuki ... and there was also some friends (girls) asking me to make Amachi character from villian to friend and I will try m best to match up with the original author
I try my best to add new posts within a week every time.. although I have written total 10 chapters they are just rough ideas and i need time to properly write them.. so stay with me!
Chapter 5 - Amachi's Secret
Amachi : " So here you are Manaka-kun "
Manaka : " Amachi ??! "
Amachi : " Won't You Introduce me to your family Manaka !? "
Manaka's Dad : " Please sit down young man... so you happen to know our Manaka "
Manaka ( With mixed feelings ) : " Yes.. Mother, Father meet Amachi , he and I used to study together back in high school"
Manaka : " Oh , welcome Amachi dear ... thanks for taking care of our son "
Amachi ( Bragging) : " Oh its nothing ,.... I was used to protecting weakinglings... ya ..ha..ha.. ha "
Manaka : " As if ?? You would run away to protect them ?"
Amachi : " What was that !?? "
Manaka : " You want a fight "
Manaka's Father (demonic shadow) : " Quit it you two before i beat the hell out of you "
Amaachi and Manaka ( submitting white flag ) : " We Quit !,.. too scary"
Manaka : " So Amachi, I heard there was something you wanted to talk to me about ??"
Amachi : " Um about that ,..yeah wait a sec.... "
Amachi (shying) : " Manaka-kun,.. you and our family are cordinally invited to attend my marriage ... please do come ! "
Manaka's Mom : " There's no need to be so fromal Amachi dear "
Manaka (drinking water) : " ph.. What ?? ... Amachi are you seriously getting married ??? .. to whom??
Amachi (in a Taunting Accent) : " Thats a seccret.. well for now , I must leave, see ya "
Yuri (cool'y sipping coffee) : " Manaka-kun and his friends are too easy.. isn't the name of bride written on the invitation?? "
Manaka (reading) :
Amachi Yamada
Weds
Kitaoji Satsuki
Wedding cermony : 8:00 PM
Dinner Party : 8:45 PM
Venue: Kastaruki Centeral Banquet Hall, Kyoto
Date : January 10 , 20xx
(!!!!???)
Manaka : " What !? "
Yuri (peeking) : " So this tomboy fell for Satsuki .. huh ?? "
Amachi( full redfaced ) : " Sorry something came up... gotta go ..! "
Manaka : " Well its good that Satsuki found someone but she and Amachi...?? "
Manaka ( duzzed) : "I think they are afterall similar to each other ...good for them.. "
Yuri : - " So when does it says is the wedding?? "
Manaka : " well lets see , according to this... um ... its 3 days later!! "
Manaka's Mom : " If thats so you better hurry and buy yourself some nice clothes and something appropriate for the couple to be by tomorrow "
Yuri : " Ok I will go tommorow with Manaka-kun and Sakura-chan tommorow "
Manaka : " So its decided then "
Manaka : " Is this T-shirt good on me ?? Maybe I should try it "
Yuri : " Yes your right, You shouldn't hurry .. the changing room is..um.. that way behind that shelf "
Yuri : " Ooh..this skirt is so nice what do you say Sakura-chan "
Sakura : " Yan ..Yan.. Yan "
Yuri (on seventh sky) : "Ooh I knew it , I look like a star "
Yuri: " Oh I'm sorry... so Sorry..are you alright "
Stranger : " No..No.., its ok , it was my fault also "
Yuri : " Toujo-san !?? "
Toujo : " Oh its you Yuri-san "
Yuri : " How are you feeling now.. are you ok "
Toujo : " Yeah I'm fine, thank you ... um ..I'm sorry for what my brother did last time "
Yuri : " No..No its fine with me ,.. And I think Manaka-kun also understands Tachibana's feelings"
Manaka : " Wait Toujo !! "
Yuri : " Wait you Baka,.. leave as she is for now she wishes to avoid you "
Manaka : "What happened ?? Did I do something wrong ?? "
Yuri : " No its something else , she was alright a minute ago ... its maybe something happened to her at home "
And my special thanks to Gregory for his comments I really wish others were like him and if your reading this please help other ichigo 100% fans by posting about my Blog on other forums!

Thursday, July 10, 2008
Chapter 4 - FATE
Scene Continued from last chapter ending
Manaka's Mom : "Yes its true,.. she is right now in Aikinawa General Hospital "
Manaka : " What happened?? tell me!! "
Manaka's Mom : " Now is not the time to talk,.. we must hurry to the hospital "
Manaka : " Okay !! "
Manaka : " Now tell me mom what happened actually?? "
Manaka's Mom : " You remember , last night it was raining hard ...when she arrived she was already very much wet even though she dried her hair... I think the damage was done ... When she woke up this morning her head was burning like coal and she suddenly collapsed,... your father immediately took her to hospital While Yuri and Sakura accompanied them... i stayed behind to tell you since you forgot your cellphone last night. "
Manaka : " I wish its nothing serious .."
Doctor - " Oh its you ...Mr Junpie! "
Doctor - " its really must be fate hat we met here..... "
Doctor - " Don't worry Mr. Junpie not the Grim Reeper who will bring unfortunate news twice!"
Manaka - " What...What do you mean?? "
Doctor - "Ms Toujo is completely fine, its noting but a high fever "
Manaka - " Reallly? Thanks..Doct..or..Thank you very much Doctor "
Doctor( thinking) - " Poor guy..His so nice yet he has to go through so much..."
Manaka's Mom - " Are you ok Ms Toujo?? How are you feeling ?? "
Toujo - "I'm fine ... thank you so much for doing all this...I'm sorry i had you troubled "
Manaka's Father- " No its fine dear...we would have done the same for anyone else and especially if its one of Our Manaka's Friend "
Toujo - " Manaka-kun!? Why are you crying Manaka-kun "
Manaka - " Baka!! Don't make me worry like that !! "
Toujo ( About to break) - " Sorry ,.. maybe I'm really a Baka..."
Manaka - " Its not like that you baka(idiot) ,.. just don't get hurt ..., it really makes me worried"
Manaka - "I...I am really sorry, It was not my intention "
Toujo( Red Faced) - " No...No...Its ok,...I know that already "
Nurse - " Well All tests sows that ur fine Ms Toujo Aya ...You can go home right now "
Manaka - " Wow thats great !! "
Tachibana - "Sis ,.. ou heard the doctor,we are leaving immediatly "
Manaka - " Hi there Tachibana "
Manaka - " Is there something wrong ?? Are you Ok ?? "
Toujo - " What are you doing Brother he only asked you how are you feelin!!! "
Tachibana - " Its not that its a warning... he has hurt your feelings before but this time i won't let him do that ...!! "
Manaka realises - " He's right its all my fault "
Some times later....
Manaka is returning home .. he is quietly walking in front while Yuri and otheres are behind him
Manaka's Mom (whispering) - " Yuri dear..try not to talk about what happened earlier to Manaka "
Yuri (low voice) - " But ..But.. ok I understand "
Yuri (low voice) - " Well then lets go somewhere to eat to lift his mood "
Manaka's Dad - " Thats a good Idea Yuri-chan !"
Manaka's Mom somehow persuades Manaka to go with them to family restuarant.
Manaka's Mom - " Manaka dear you sure like pastries very much "
Manaka( Hesitatingly) - " Ye..ah "
Yuri - " Look how Sakura-chan is playin with her french fries.. Ha... Ha..its so hilarious "
Stranger : " So here you are Manaka Junpie I have ben trying to contact you for days where have you been "
Manaka - " Amachi !?? "
Amachi - " Hey there , I am glad you recognised me ..ha... ha.. ha... "
"" Old Rivals meets up, But what the use when ther's no Rivalry ""
Stay Tuned for the next Exciting Chapter of Ichigo 100% 2 { fanfiction :) }
Note - First of all you must be thinking that i am making this a sad story but pardon me the real story hasn't even begun these early chapters are to connect original story with mine ... And since i am a Toujo Fan I wanted to make clear that Toujo's heart is not an open book in which Manaka can enter anytime he wants ...I want to make it tough for Manaka ... I m still not sure that should I Unite them or give it a same ending as the original... By the way please comment and click some ads also(below google ads )
Thursday, July 3, 2008
Chapter 3 - Again?
Sunday, June 22, 2008
Chapter 2 " The Confrontation "
Scene Aya coming out of trail room confronts Manaka, And now both are standing speechless looking at each other...
Manaka (thinking) :" This is bad ,..Isn't there something to talk about!!?? Yaaaa..!!! I am always slow at these things!! "
Toujo (thinking) : " I didn't think I would meet Manaka-kun here "
Suddenly Aya notices Something....
Toujo: " Manaka-kun there's a... a baby on your shoulder!!! "
Manaka: "yaah,.. she is "Sakura" mine and noshino's daughter. "
Again a sudden silence... and Manaka and Toujo again standing silent
Toujo (thinking) : " Ayaa...Again I must say something ,...what to say,...what to say??? "
Toujo : " Um ...Sakura-Chan is soo... cute ,.. If you don't mind can..can I hold her for a moment!!? "
Manaka : " Yes of course,.!! Why not.. here !! "
Manaka hands over sakura to Toujo ,..Toujo thinking while cuddling Sakura
Toujo (thinking) : Umm.... It's so warm,...soo.. good to hold a baby..so warm...I wish maybe .. just even if in a dream,... if with Manaka -kun.......... No, what am I thinking!?? Tsukasa-chan and Manaka-kun are now man and women!!
SFX- Bann...ggg!!
Toujo instinctively frightens but realises that Sakura is slipping of her handand at the exact moment Manaka also notices it,...Both reach for Sakura...
Toujo - " Sakura - Chann!!! "
Manaka - " Sakura "
Toujo - " I'm really sorry ...its all my fault that Sakura-chan could've got hurt...I'm so clumssy!!! "
Manaka - " No..no no its not your fault even I got surprised there ,...Its definetly my fault!!
Manaka and Toujo suddenly realises something....they were so concerned that they didn't realise how close they are standing now and with a little redness on their face they are standing speechless ,...then suddenly Sakura grabs a cheek of both and says
"Mama .....Dadaa"
Manaka steams out while Toujo face is full red and out turns around out of embarassment
Few Minutes later Toujo and Manaka continue their little chat
Toujo : " How is your film making these days,..I heard you signed a Big Contract some time ago"
Manaka : " Yah,...that's true cause of that contract I'm living a comfortable life,..I just finished One out of three movies under that contract "
Toujo : That's Great news.. well how is noshino-chan doing??
Manaka (hesitatingly) : "Well you see... she..she died giving birth one and a half year ago!! "
Toujo in a a Shock,..speechles ,..waits and says
Toujo : " I'm really sorry Manaka-kun I shouldn't have said that ,..thats very sad to hear "
Manaka : " Its Okay,.. its not like its was your fault or anything... lets go and talk somewhere else "
Toujo : " Yes ,..that would be right "
Manaka and Toujo are walk'n on the street while Toujo is carrying Sakura ,..Manaka is carrying the bought items and Toujo's Bag....
Manaka : Should we go in that Family Restuarant??
Before Toujo could say anything ,.. a young couple passes by them ...
Wife:" Look honey such a beautifull couple and thier baby is so cute, I really envy them!! "
Husband: " Don't say it so loud ,..they may hear it "
Wife : " Darling ,... Lets have a beautifull baby like that "
Husband : " Ok ,..lets try it tonight "
Manaka and Toujo who overheard the conversation now can't control there blushing
Manaka : " Umm.. Toujo-chan if your bothered we can go somewhere else!! "
As Manaka begins to walk again...Toujo grab his sleeve....
Toujo(blushing and faced down) : " Its okay, lets go in !! "
Manaka :"well..if its okay with ...."
That Evening Manaka and Toujo talked uptill way late and now Manaka is accompanying Toujo to her House
Toujo : " Manaka-kun ....look Sakura is asleep already "
Manaka : " Yeah ,..I guess she had a wonderfull day today "
Toujo : " Manaka-kun can we meet sometime again.....No... No....Just I wanna see your movies and if your busy ,...I can Understand !!! "
Manaka : " No its okay ,..Cause of you Sakura had a good day today and I will have to pay your debt and afterall were are friends also !! "
Both have arrived at Toujo's home .....
Toujo : " Ok then ,...see you later Manaka-kun!!! "
Manaka : " Yah ,,... farewell Toujo "
Toujo is walkin back into her house......
Toujo ( to herself ) : " What ..What is this feeling...Why is my heart beat running so hard,..its not like I'm happy that Manka-kun is single again,...but then what is this feeling ??!
Toujo's Brother : " Sis,...welcome home...hey you look cheerfull today,..why is that ??? "
Toujo : "Amm..its nothing..really!! Its nothing as you think !! I didn't met anybody "
Toujo's Brother : " I never said anything about meeting someone...but now think of it you did meet someone...someone you like...am I dumped again??? "
Toujo : " No you stop saying that.. you are always like that ..just go to sleep already !! "
Meanwhile back at Manaka's house ....
Manaka to himself :" Well I never thought I will meet Aya there after so long but anyways it looks like sakura had a wonderfull day today.... "
Manaka to himself : " Ah..man looks like thanks to Aya ,..Sakura won't be awake tonight.. I should use this time time to rest a little "
Splitscreen- Both Toujo and Manka looking out of the window of there respective house gazing the night sky...
Narration - "The Stars are shining tonight in full gaze,...there are two who wouldn't give sleep a chase "
End of Chapter 2
Saturday, June 21, 2008
Chapter 1 The Birth
Tsukasa and Manaka have married.. 6 yrs have passed from high school graduation...and every one is busy,..specially Tsukasa and Manaka who are days away from having there first baby...
and this is when the tragedy strikes!!!
Manaka -" Tsukasa I'm going out"
Tsukasa - "Wait a minute honey...your not going to construction site,.. where too??"
Manaka - "Yes your right..today is a big day ..I have a meeting with a big production house after which our life will be very comfortable! Its my big break!"
Tsukasa - "thats great!! Good luck darling!"
Manaka - " Will you be alright??"
Tsukasa - "Its Ok! Since Yui-chan is here i will be alright"
Manaka - "Ok then bye"
Scene -- Manaka walks out of the house for his big day
Back at Home...
Yui -" Tsukasa-chan ,..you shouldn't walk around the house,.. the floor is still wet!!"
Tsukasa - "Yui-Chan..its ok ,..I am carefull!!"
Scene - Telephone Bell rings... and Noshino stands up to attend it
Suddenly Noshino steps on a cloth and tremendously
falls on her stomach
Tsukasa - " Aaaaaaaaahhhhhh!!!! "
Yui - " What,..what happened Tsukasa-chan!!!!???"
Scene - Yui enters the living room and sees Tsukasa agnoying
in pain
Yui - "What happened Tsukasa-chan ??!"
Yui to herself - " Why am i asking ,...we can talk later but now she needs help"
Yui quickly calls an Ambulance and Tsukasa is taken to the hospital
and calls Manaka
Yui - "Manaka-kun....., Manaka-kun ...its ...its Tsukasa........"
Manaka - " What ..What happened to Tsukasa ??"
Yui - " She...She slipped,..and she is in Hokaido Municipal Hospital "
Manaka rushes to the Hospital and upon entering meets a
Doctor
Docter- " Hello,...you must be Manaka ?? "
Manaka - " Yes,..how is Noshino doctor?? "
Doctor - " Her Condition is very critical, we are currently operating on her!! "
Manaka - " Will she be alright?? .... And the Baby?? "
Doctor - " We can't say anything ,..we are also awaiting the results of some test "
Five hours later...Manaka and Yui enter to meet Tsukasa in ICU
Yui - " Sorry Manaka-Kun its all my fault I was there to take care of her and i could not do even that!! "
Tsukasa - " No...its not your fault,..I was the one not carefull"
Manaka - " Noshino ...will you be allright??? How do you feel??? "
Tsukasa - " Darling I must tell you before hand that I won't survive!!!! "
Manaka (Shacked ) - " What are you sayin ?? The Test results are not even in "
Tsukasa (Sadly) - " But I just know but also feel glad that nothing happened to our baby!! "
Manaka - " Stop sayin that ...you will live !!!!!!! "
Tsukasa - " I ... I want to ask you something Manaka!!.... You must promise me!! "
Manaka - " Anything for you...I will do anything "
Tsukasa - " Amm....will you ,..will you be my boyfriend and will you love me in my next life?? "
Manaka ( cryin ) - " Yes of course ,...you idiot!! Is there a doubt !!?? "
Tsukasa ( cryin ) - " Thanks....then promise me you will live,,....live for the sake of our daughter & will find a loving mother for our love symbol.....and,,....and you will not tell her about me as long as possible!! "
Manaka (Cryin) - "Why are you saying this!!? Please save your energy to recover"
Tsukasa (cryin) - " Sorry but I know that i won't see tomorrow sunrise!! So please promise me... you must!!!!"
Scene -doctor seeing a test result (written on that paper) - " Patient 12XXX- Noshino Tsukasa Survival rate ---- 0%
Manaka (cryin) - "Ok,...I will do it "
Tsukasa (sobing) - " There's one more thing ..please chose her new mother carefully... since your slow at these thing ... she will be the only one in whose arms our baby will smile!! "
Manaka - " yes!! "
Tsukasa (In her last breath) - "Very We...ll ....okhu.....ohu ....Please name her ""SAKURA"" . "
Manaka - " Tsukasa don't go ...dont leave me ,.....NO NO YAah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "
Scene - Doctor rushes in and checks Tsukasa and turns towards Manaka
& Shakes his head
Doctor - " Sorry..... but Ms Tsukasa Noshino is no more!! ""
Manaka - " Tsu. Tsu ... Tsukaaaaaaaassssssssaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "
Later that evening - Heavy rain going on..... Yui holding Sakura under
the terrace just near the hospital ...and Manaka well his Crying outside
in the Rain
Filler Page ---- "" One and a half year later before the Christmas "
Manaka with Sakura on his Back--...
Manaka - " Sakura do you want to go in there "
Sakura - Yaaan!! ( like babies do)
While Manaka is browsing cloth he picks up some thing for himself too as he is
entering the trail room and just as he puts his arm on the handle ....Suddenly!!
And a familiar face walks out......Its.... " Aya Toujo "
Narration -- " The Rebellious Fate again takes a turn to connect the past & present "
" This year the cherry trees will blossom in Winter "
END OF THE FIRST CHAPTER
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