Chapter 4 - FATE

Please Read The note at the ending of the post

Scene Continued from last chapter ending


Manaka : "Mom what are you sayin ?? "

Manaka's Mom : "Yes its true,.. she is right now in Aikinawa General Hospital "

Manaka : " What happened?? tell me!! "

Manaka's Mom : " Now is not the time to talk,.. we must hurry to the hospital "

Manaka : " Okay !! "

Manaka And his mom o their way to hospital, in a taxi now talking

Manaka : " Now tell me mom what happened actually?? "

Manaka's Mom : " You remember , last night it was raining hard ...when she arrived she was already very much wet even though she dried her hair... I think the damage was done ... When she woke up this morning her head was burning like coal and she suddenly collapsed,... your father immediately took her to hospital While Yuri and Sakura accompanied them... i stayed behind to tell you since you forgot your cellphone last night. "

Manaka : " I wish its nothing serious .."

Manaka and his Mom entering the room where Toujo is...
Manaka: " You... "

Doctor - " Oh its you ...Mr Junpie! "

Ironically the doctor is the same as One and Half year ago from the hospital where Tsukasa Died ,..This brings back horrific memory back to Manaka's mind and he is standing speechless...

Doctor - " its really must be fate hat we met here..... "

Manaka Still under Shock

Doctor - " Don't worry Mr. Junpie not the Grim Reeper who will bring unfortunate news twice!"

Manaka - " What...What do you mean?? "

Doctor - "Ms Toujo is completely fine, its noting but a high fever "

Manaka - " Reallly? Thanks..Doct..or..Thank you very much Doctor "

Manaka entering the room and Doctor leaving...

Doctor( thinking) - " Poor guy..His so nice yet he has to go through so much..."

Manaka's Mom - " Are you ok Ms Toujo?? How are you feeling ?? "

Toujo - "I'm fine ... thank you so much for doing all this...I'm sorry i had you troubled "

Manaka's Father- " No its fine dear...we would have done the same for anyone else and especially if its one of Our Manaka's Friend "

Toujo Notices Manaka who is standing on the other side

Manaka has been standing there collecting the pieces of his shattered heart and tears coming out like a fountain...

Toujo - " Manaka-kun!? Why are you crying Manaka-kun "

Manaka - " Baka!! Don't make me worry like that !! "

Toujo ( About to break) - " Sorry ,.. maybe I'm really a Baka..."

Manaka without realising it ,.. in his emotions hugs Aya

Manaka - " Its not like that you baka(idiot) ,.. just don't get hurt ..., it really makes me worried"

Manaka realises it that aToujo is all read faced , why...he is holding her, Manaka immediately withdraws ...

Manaka - "I...I am really sorry, It was not my intention "

Toujo( Red Faced) - " No...No...Its ok,...I know that already "

Nurse comes in...

Nurse - " Well All tests sows that ur fine Ms Toujo Aya ...You can go home right now "

Manaka - " Wow thats great !! "

Suddenly Manaka and Toujo realise that someone else is here...its Toujo's Brother.. Tachibana

Tachibana - "Sis ,.. ou heard the doctor,we are leaving immediatly "

Manaka - " Hi there Tachibana "

Tachibana glares at Manaka

Manaka - " Is there something wrong ?? Are you Ok ?? "

Tachibana Loses his patience and suddenly slaps Manaka...

Toujo - " What are you doing Brother he only asked you how are you feelin!!! "

Tachibana - " Its not that its a warning... he has hurt your feelings before but this time i won't let him do that ...!! "

Manaka realises - " He's right its all my fault "

Manaka doesn't reacts and stands quietly while Tachibana forcefully takes Toujo away...

Some times later....

Manaka is returning home .. he is quietly walking in front while Yuri and otheres are behind him

Manaka's Mom (whispering) - " Yuri dear..try not to talk about what happened earlier to Manaka "

Yuri (low voice) - " But ..But.. ok I understand "

Yuri (low voice) - " Well then lets go somewhere to eat to lift his mood "

Manaka's Dad - " Thats a good Idea Yuri-chan !"

Manaka's Mom somehow persuades Manaka to go with them to family restuarant.

Manaka's Mom - " Manaka dear you sure like pastries very much "

Manaka( Hesitatingly) - " Ye..ah "

Yuri - " Look how Sakura-chan is playin with her french fries.. Ha... Ha..its so hilarious "

Suddenly someone puts his hand on Manaka's Shoulder from behinnd .

Stranger : " So here you are Manaka Junpie I have ben trying to contact you for days where have you been "

Manaka turns about....

Manaka - " Amachi !?? "

Amachi - " Hey there , I am glad you recognised me ..ha... ha.. ha... "

"" Old Rivals meets up, But what the use when ther's no Rivalry ""

Amachi has something important to say,.. and what about Toujo will she ever meet our Hero Manaka again ??

Stay Tuned for the next Exciting Chapter of Ichigo 100% 2 { fanfiction :) }

Note - First of all you must be thinking that i am making this a sad story but pardon me the real story hasn't even begun these early chapters are to connect original story with mine ... And since i am a Toujo Fan I wanted to make clear that Toujo's heart is not an open book in which Manaka can enter anytime he wants ...I want to make it tough for Manaka ... I m still not sure that should I Unite them or give it a same ending as the original... By the way please comment and click some ads also(below google ads )








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